Fuck, yeah. They all absolutely correspond my perceptions. I like your style and interpretation more than too much... If only you depict more Wednesday|Odin and World|Loki from American Gods, there're still so little arts with them.
i know he's still in sketch format, but i do agree with what the other bloke said. Shadow did strike me as being rather dark skinned. i also had an image of him having longer hair for some reason. lol. but still, its a sketch so who cares.
YES !!! i'm reading this book right now, and its amazing. awesome stuff. loving your style. you pretty much captured exactly how i pictured them all. when i read books, it always plays in my mind in an anime style, so this is just flawless. lol. keep up the brillant work mate.
Not only are you using a cookie-cutter anime drawing style, but you made a poor selection of characters to illustrate (probably just chose characters that your limited imagination seen as token anime characters).
...Who cares. It's your perception and her view on things, and her art do NOT have a reason to fit yours in this matter, or any other. If you don't like her style or her portrayal of the characters on this piece, you can critizise politely and behave like a decent human beign, or you can fuck off for acting like a complete and utter douchebag. See? I can be crude too.
Jesus Christ in Motherfucking Heaven...
Anyway... I love your style, if my other comments in your Good Omens fanworks haven't made it abundantly clear by now.
No matter how many times I listen to the audiobook, these are the faces I picture for the characters. These are by far my favorite interpretations of the characters. You should do separate full body shots of the characters. You are a brilliant artist, Zelu.